W.A.L.T write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
This term we were looking at a Chimp's story who was sent in to space for 65 years and we needed to make a story about it. This is my story about the Space Chimp. This is my final draft.
Hi
ReplyDeleteThat is a really good story you can be a author sometime. But some you had mistakes like at the chapter two and three you didn't put speech marks where someone is speaking and you didn't put enter when someone is speaking. Any ways it's a good story.
Hey Samyog, I really liked your story but I see some mistakes like Axle said. But it is a very nice story keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
DeleteHello Samyog my name is Samuel. I really enjoyed your story because of the way you went ”Then… Sharp Knife”, also I liked the transitions between each slide.Could you please add a bit more of the story because you end quite quickly. If you want to look at my blog the link is. http://spssamuelj.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteThank you Samuel for your wonderful comment.
Delete