My Space Chimp Story - First Draft

W.A.L.T write a narrative.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

Include a twist to add interest.

This term we were looking at a Chimp's story who was sent in to space for 65 years and we needed to make a story about it. This is my story about the Space Chimp.

	Punctuation	Vocabulary
Self	R5	R3/R4
Peer	R5	R3

My Life

5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Blast off! I was forced back like I might fall off the chair. I was so scared. It was like there was a huge earthquake at  America, When I got blasted off! It was 1961. Now I’m alone, the Air Controller called me after 1 day,  Ring, Ring, Ring. I answered ooh, ahh. They said you will be asleep after 5 or 6 hours and Good Night Rocky the chimp.

From early age, I was the only the first chimp  getting trained to go to space.. After I was asleep .Then the sunlight fall onto my eyes when I was nearly to sleep. Then suddenly the sunlight faded away. I fall asleep. It’s been 1978. I haven’t heard from my owner after I had fall asleep. When I wake up I looked at me and my owner’s picture. I really missed my owner. Then suddenly the sunlight again fall into my eyes. Then I was so happy because I saw the earth. Now it’s 2026. I didn’t know how to land. I was finding the instruction paper when I was finding it I just mistakenly pressed a button!. The fire started coming outside of my rocket. Then it was moving as fast as a spinning ball.Then I knew I was landing to earth but “I don’t think I will survive”!. The rocket throwed a parachute out for me to land. Then………...

Terra Firma!!!!

This term we were looking at a Chimp's story who was sent in to space for 65 years and we needed to make a story about it. This is my story about the Space Chimp.